sounds good. kept me interested all the way through, and theres some really nice touches in there. I had a few problems with the mix near the beginning with the banjo strums(I'm guessing that what it was) drowning out the vocals.
But overal, yeah, i really liked it.
I noticed the muddling of the vocals at the beginning too. I think it mostly has to do with the mp3 conversion. It sounds fine in .wav format. But even still, I am going to go back and EQ or reduce the volume of the banjo in beginning.